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Tears upon the pitted anvil by ~freakoutX:iconfreakoutX:

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tears upon the pitted anvil
they are flowing from my eyes,
tears upon the pitted anvil ive had it with these lies.
tears upon the pitted anvil the pitted anvil breaks
tears upon the pitted anvil they form three big lakes
a lake of lies which i endured for much and much too long
a lake of loves i had,they broke my heart and stepped on me, they made me feel so sad
and a lake of pain is what they put me in,a gaint lake of pain in which im drowning for nearly 18 years now...will i someday go insane?
©2005-2009 ~freakoutX
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Author's Comments

Its me in a cry of pain nothing new here :)

its just that last night i went out with a group of old friends,they asked if i came too
they said it will be fun man the thre of us.

i should have never believed that,they brought their girlfriends and they were talking to eachother and making out...and i...i was alone...nobody to speak to nobody to care for,it made me realize first of all il never be with these guys again...and second of all...well i think my pain is from lonelyness...one of the things i always cared about...good old lonelyness

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~jemmajam Nov 20, 2005, 2:17:30 AM
:hug:

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~freakoutX Nov 20, 2005, 3:06:13 AM
:)
;)

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~4G0NY Nov 20, 2005, 4:32:12 AM
man, that sucks.. next time its lakes of doner sauce and beer, with us :)
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~freakoutX Nov 20, 2005, 5:01:18 AM
yeah guess it is huh :)
that better
wel just let mick be with his gf cause well feed her doner too :P

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~4G0NY Nov 20, 2005, 5:09:11 AM
oh yes, there will be doner... :evillaugh:
and shell be fat :evillaugh: x2
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~freakoutX Nov 20, 2005, 6:35:16 AM
muhuhuhahahahaha

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~ProsePetals Nov 20, 2005, 7:11:51 AM
Interesting the repetition. :nod:

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~DrearyThoughts Nov 20, 2005, 7:14:16 AM
:hug: Very sad poem...but lovely

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~DrearyThoughts Nov 20, 2005, 7:14:40 AM
That's mean! :wow:

Boys are stupid! :P

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Also check out my historical costume designs at ~Musichetta
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